Pets should be treated like family members. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.
Some people think that pets should not be treated as family members. They cite this based on their belief that pets are animals and should not get the treatment as humans. I, however, strongly disagree with this and believe that pets should be treated like family members. The three reasons for my belief are as follows.
First of all, pets are loyal to their owners. For example, I petted a dog for five years and always treated it as a member of my family and not as an animal. Whenever we used to go out of our house to any other places such as to our relatives or to the market, my dog always used to guard the house and waited for us to return. Moreover, one night an intruder tried to enter our house and it was only because of the continuous barking of my dog, he ran away. Hence, dogs are such loyal friends to us; they deserve to be treated like family members.
Secondly, pets are obedient when treated nicely. For example, one of my friends pets a dog which is around 1 year old. My friend does not treat the dog properly and kicks it whenever it does something wrong. As a result of this, the dog is always scared and tries to run away and hide from him. However, the other members of his family treat the dog with love and provide proper care to it and because of this, the dog is obedient to them and follows them where ever they go and does whatever they say.
Finally, pets are good friends of people. Whenever you are alone in your house and you are feeling low, your pet will always be your side to accompany. Pets don't demand anything from the owners expect for their love. For example, last summer, all of my family members were gone to one of our relatives such that it was just me and my dog in my house. I would have easily got bored if my dog was not with me to play and accompany me. Thus it is very important to treat your pet like family members because they also think of us a family only.
In conclusion, though some people might disagree, I strongly believe that pets have every right to be treated like family members. I cite this belief because pets are loyal to us and some of them even provide security to our house, they are obedient and trustful, and they are our friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28571428571 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05909712068 2.67179642975 77% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438095238095 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0183204828 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8181818182 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77272727273 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288358898382 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108799914319 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112980898357 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199908770833 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11539981566 0.0645574589148 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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