PLAYING COMPUTER GAMES
In recents years, playin computer games has become a broad issue to the general public. Some people believe the issue that playing computer games has many advantages. However, others think it could also have some negative effects. In my opinion, its cons could never overshadow its pros. Discussed below are several benefits as well as drawbacks of this issue.
First and foremost, people should recognize that there are many advantages of playing computer games. A very important point to consider is that it is an entertainment. This means that after a hardworking day or a stressful lesson, playing computer games helps us to relax. To illustrate this point, I would like to mention that nowadays teachers are used to create computer games for their students to play after classes. Another point is I would like to mention is that there are various type of educational computer games which help us in some subjects. This is because of the fact that game producers created games on history, games for learning english or for studying Vietnamese. “Who is the billionaire?” is an example.
On the other hand, inaddition to the important point of this problem, it has some disadvantages. In fact, some people have this opinion because playing too much computer games makes us addicted or passive. This means that it is bad for our health. There are some diseases such as short-sighted, headache or backache. It also wastes of time. Furthermore, some games contain violence or crime. Thus, the evil influence of computer games on young generations is inevitable. This can be shown by the number of young violence are increasing each day.
In conclusion, the above mentioned facts have outlined the benefits as well as the drawbacks of this issue. Its disadvantages should be taken in to account. People should know how to spend time on it and how to choose the eductional computer games. People also should take advantages of the pros and minimize the cons of this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...r games has become a broad issue to the general public. Some people believe the issue that pla...
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Line 2, column 565, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...which help us in some subjects. This is because of the fact that game producers created games on history...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, so, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70843494194 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506060606061 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2590379061 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.75 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41824466594 0.236089414692 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117677132091 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143818926277 0.0737576698707 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261311106185 0.150856017488 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148580646441 0.0645574589148 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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