playing sports can teach people lessons about life.
Throughout history, people have tried to learn some lessons and skill to be beneficial for them in their lives. Some people by traveling all around the world and some other by studying and reading books have tried to improve their abilities and skills to become more successful in their society or lives. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether playing sports can teach people some lessons about life or not. I personally contend that playing sport is a beneficial way that people can learn more about the life. I will elaborate on my point of view through the following paragraphs.
The first reason coming to mind about my idea is that playing sports, especially playong in sport team can learn people to become social and help people to learn more about social interaction that is a vital factor for everyone who lives in a society. As an example, in playing football eleven people come together and make a team so this team can provide a situation that these eleven people meet each other every day for one season that is around 5-6 month and during this meeting these eleven people make friend with each other, they can talk with each other that this help them to improve their communication and interaction.
The other reason I would like to bring about my idea is that playing sport can learn people to learn about cooperation and as everybody knows, cooperation is a key factor that can improve a person's social life. For instance, when I was 12 years old, I was a selfish student and I did not care about my students until I participated in basketball team in high school and in one of the important basketball match, I fall and my ankle sprained and I couldn't continue the match, in that moment I thought we will lose the game but our coach called all the team member and speak with all of them and learn them how they should cooperate with each other and cover my missing role in team and during the game I saw that all my team member cover my role and finally we won that match
The last but not the least reason is that playing sports can learn people to become responsible and improve responsibility in every one. According to the recent research in Tehran University of Medical Science in 2015 scientists found that children who participate in sports activity are 75 percent more responsible than the other student and this founding lead us to participate in sport activity especially in young age to improve responsibility in them.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that playing sport is very beneficial for everyone to learn lessons about life. All in all, it is highly recommended that people by playing sports improve their responsibility, cooperation and their social interactions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: to people
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Suggestion: to people
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, regarding, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2304.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 484.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76033057851 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58418136099 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435950413223 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.1344086022 199% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.34926026 48.9658058833 340% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.0 100.406767564 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.3333333333 20.6045352989 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40340993027 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199340276492 0.076458572812 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160958221365 0.0737576698707 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245299588993 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959012654753 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 11.7677419355 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.1575268817 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.22 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.0537634409 179% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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