Imagine that you are planning to take a vacation, trying to decide between two places to visit. Which of these two options do you believe would give you better information about making your choice? Why?-- Reading about the places online--Discussing the pl
Throughout history, going to trips have been great hobbies for people of all around the world. People try to find some ways to get information about places they want to go to save their time and money on their trips. There is a controversial question which is raised regarding this issue is whether getting online information about places is more beneficial or asking question about the places from someone who visited there. I personally contend that getting online information from web pages is more beneficial for people who want to travel. I will elaborate on my point of view through the following paragraphs.
The first and foremost reason coming to mind in that people by reading online can get a lot of information about places from several people with different idea and favor so people regarding their favor and ideas can get correct information by reading online. As a personal experience, last year, I wanted to go to china for Christmas vacation, at first I ask some question about the price of hotel, transportation and their foods from one my friend who visited China for several time and she told me that the transportation and hotel in China is so expensive but I read some online information about China and by reading people comments and suggestion, I found that in China there are a lot of hotel and motel with excellent situation and very inexpensive price and this information helped me to travel to China and could save my money and enjoy from my trip.
The other reason I would like to bring about my idea is that online information about places is more accurate than getting information from someone who visited the places before because maybe the economy of a country change every year or every season and the price of traveling to those places maybe change so by reading online information about the places people can gain up to date information about their destinations. For instance in my country, Iran, during the last year because of United State ban, the economic situation has changed several time in a year so if people want to visit Iran it is very important to them get online information instead of getting information from a person who visited Iran last year.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reason lead us to the conclusion that getting online information about the places people who want to visit is more beneficial than asking people who visited the places before because online information can give people accurate and precise data and information and help people to consider the places from several aspects. All in all, It is highly recommended that people before going on a trip, get online information about their destination place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'several times'.
Suggestion: several times
...rom one my friend who visited China for several time and she told me that the transportation...
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Line 3, column 686, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hotel seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of hotels'.
Suggestion: a lot of hotels
...estion, I found that in China there are a lot of hotel and motel with excellent situation and ...
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Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'several times'.
Suggestion: several times
...ban, the economic situation has changed several time in a year so if people want to visit Ir...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, regarding, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 8.0752688172 359% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2238.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8864628821 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62773628771 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.406113537118 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 726.3 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.1344086022 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.656599309 48.9658058833 322% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.454545455 100.406767564 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.6363636364 20.6045352989 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204318728298 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100997824458 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741367048179 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157701269496 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293323366824 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 11.7677419355 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 58.1214874552 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.1575268817 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.97 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.0537634409 183% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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