the way people dresses is a good indication of his or her personality
Appearance has been one of the important parts of everybody throughout history and people all around the world have tried to find some ways and approaches to make an attractive appearance. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether The way people dresses is a good indication of his or her personality or not. I personally contend that the way people dresses and people's appearance is a good indication of his/her character. I will elaborate on my point of view through the following paragraphs.
The first reason coming to mind is that people who wear a suitable dress are people who are an organized person. An organized person is a person who attended to all parts of his/her character, these people manage their time and money to buy some kinds of suitable dresses to have a good appearance between their friend and co-workers. For instance, in the university, I had a friend that she comes from a poor family but she was an organized person, When she got her salary in the first of a month, she put all of her money to several parts and one of those parts was for buying suitable dress, so during thatyears nobody found that she comes from a poor family.
The other reason I would bring about my opinion is that people who wear good dresses respects at first to his/herself and then respect to the other peope. For instance in an International conference all of the member should wear suitable dress or the wearing for a party is very different from the wearing in the university so if a person don't attention to these situations it means that she/he dosen't respect to those situarion. According to a recent report in a famous psychological journal, psychologists asserted that wearing suitable dress has a direct relation to the personality and respectiveness of a person.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reason lead us to the conclusion that the way people dresses is a good indication of his/her personality because it shows that people are organized and respectful about their situation. All in all, it is highly recommended to people to try to wear suitable dresses and make their appearence good.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...earing in the university so if a person dont attention to these situations it means ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, so, then, as for, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82210242588 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83299822042 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463611859838 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4562803398 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.083333333 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9166666667 20.6045352989 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.508514923862 0.236089414692 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.25150913714 0.076458572812 329% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.223311244715 0.0737576698707 303% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.369149642001 0.150856017488 245% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15677812932 0.0645574589148 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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