Question 37
Many people welcome the opening of shopping areas near their homes. On the other hand, some people are strongly opposed to the construction of such facilities. If the opening of a large shopping center in your neighborhood were announced, would you support or oppose its construction? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
While some people do not agree with the construction of a shopping center near their neighborhood, I am on the side to welcome its opening. I will explore the reasons for this in detail.
First of all, when a big shopping facility is available near my house, it would be very convenient all the time. When I was living in the suburban area of Tokyo, there was no restaurants, book stores, clothing stores, or even the smallest convenience stores. The only way to purchase something is to get a twenty-minute drive or take a train to get five stations beyond. That was a real pain for me because I am fond of shopping. Browsing stores through windows gives me a thrill as well. Therefore I would subscribe to the idea of constructing a shopping facility nearby.
Another reason comes when I compare a shopping mall with an online shop. It is true that online shopping is on the trend these days, but live shopping still has an edge over internet shopping because we can feel and touch the real texture of items. When we want to buy books, it is important to flip through pages in order to make sure the book in my hands is the very one I want to get. My personal experience tells me why this process is important. I once bought a secondhand book on the internet, but they sent me a book full of underlines, making it almost illegible. If I had found it on a real bookstore, I could have confirmed if there was no writing on the item.
People might argue that a shopping facility nearby would be a defect in their living conditions, demonstrating some examples in which excessive noise and busy roads were brought about by a crowd of people. However, I am sure that we can avoid this problem through talking with the due company. We can talk through until we are convinced by their conditions.
For those reasons above, I would support the construction of a new shopping center near my house.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...we are convinced by their conditions. For those reasons above, I would support...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51162790698 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64571138584 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561046511628 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5261357546 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2222222222 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223492273157 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669606019676 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863817544932 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144071055282 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553041313811 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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