reading book or watching movie
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that reading books and watching movies are the major hobbies of vast majorities of people all around the world. In today's hectic city of life, these two hobbies merged and play an important role in people's lives. Some people believe that it is better to watch movies in free time, while other people take a radically different view and point out that reading books is much more important than watching movies. Due to the controversial nature of this question, there is not a general argument on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that reading many books is more beneficial for human beings than watching various movies about the same story.
To commence with, myriads of people are interested in watching movies and reading different books owing to the fact that they fill their leisure time. Although both hobbies play a significant role in people's lives, individuals can take advantage of reading books vigorously. Generally phrased, reading different stories will provide an opportunity for people to improve their creativity and imagination. As a vivid example, in a movie, everything is crystal clear and it is not necessary for people to imagine or predict everything. As a matter of fact, when people are reading a book, they have to create characters, hallmarks, scene and so forth, to understand the subject of a story meticulously. Not only can these imaginations help humans perceive the story precisely but also can strengthen their whimsical beliefs. To elucidate more on this issue, enhance and develop creativity and imagination is of utmost important goals that reading books could help people achieve.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that read many books could provide fertile ground for human beings especially juveniles to enhance their knowledge and gain enough information. If we take a minute to ponder over it many information are summarized and time of movies are short, so, they could not be an excellent source for gaining helpful information. In fact, hardly ever can people find useful information in movies. Going into the depth, the more books read by people, the more information could be found in the different realm.
However, this is one side of a coin. Watching movies could be more enjoyable than reading books due to the fact that people have to spend a great amount of time to read a long story, while that story could be presented on the screen in shorter time. In addition, movies will provide a great chance for families to gather and have fun in their leisure times.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, while, in addition, in fact, in short, as a matter of fact, by and large, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2218.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9954954955 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61108995704 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493243243243 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.475369821 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.9 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410163984509 0.236089414692 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132115486734 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134721319492 0.0737576698707 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23233172429 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143570784779 0.0645574589148 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.