I my view, i think that world would be more beautiful if everybody always does things that he enjoys doing. So i am not agree with that statement which said that people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing for two raisons.
The first raison is that doing something we do not like makes us stressful and angry. This state of mind can affect the family and friends. For example, if the father do not like his job, he will sometimes pour out his anger on his wife or/and his children. Then, children will lose confidence to them and will have bad grades in school. This bad being can be extended to the community and affect his relationships with his neighbors, colleagues and friends.
The second raison is that by enjoying things they do, people learn more and they can add more value if the requirement it is a project for example. They will never get bored and they always find different manner to enjoy to it.
In conclusion, people must always do things they enjoys doing, and their happiness will be share from one person to another.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 52.1666666667 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 1977.66487455 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 191.0 407.700716846 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58115183246 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2946396264 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 212.727598566 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596858638743 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 618.680645161 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1218776045 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.5 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315255254235 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12917725224 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135344366571 0.0737576698707 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223451437225 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108144664596 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 86.8835125448 30% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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