In my view, I think that it is better to have to specialize in on specific subject instead to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects for several reasons.
First of all, when you specialize in one subject, you can master it. So you can afford to talk with specialists and give some advices because you know exactly what you do. For example, in accounting, there are different stages. You begin by intern, next you become assistant accountant, then accountant and after master or expert. That why it takes too much time to reach there. That is the same with the career of doctor or lawyer.
Secondly, the specialist is already looking for. In particular situation, we need one specialist who can solve the problem because he or she has enough experience on it. To take the same example up, the accountant must know for example tax system, laws, how to calculate payroll and how to make finance statement. However experience is earned with the time.
Thirdly, it is not possible to be at the same time doctor, accountant and lawyer. That true we can have enough knowledge in these three subjects, but it is impossible to master to them simultaneously. So, one day, we must make a choice and begin own career if not, we will lose ourselves.
All to all, chocing one academic subjects it too important and it is increase our chance to find first job after the graduation and successing in own live.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...oll and how to make finance statement. However experience is earned with the time. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for example, i think, in particular, you know, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 247.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73279352227 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60755147405 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591093117409 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1274839467 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9333333333 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23126995374 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662098427725 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892135655434 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136306582203 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113960523804 0.0645574589148 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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