Many people prefer to do sports or social activities in universities and colleges; others think that studies are most important. In my view, i think that sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. There are three following reasons.
First of all, the mainly reason why students go to universities is for studies. Whether is mathematics, science, art or politic, they must have a good training. So universities and colleges must provide them resources they need to achieve their goals. For example, good teachers like expert, a good organization of courses, and a confortable classes. All these examples require a big investment of the college.
Secondly, the fame of the universities depends on success of their students in a social live. We can take the case of Harvard, which most of its students are very rich and powerful because of the quality of its classes.
Thirdly, although studies are very important, students have social live, so sport – physical activities and social activities are essential for their integration in a society. Furthermore, take part in the activities of the university will allow them to discover different kind of behaviors in the society and how to handle to that. Likewise, they will improve their communication skill and the way to convince people around. So, if a person acquires knowledge through education but do not invest any time in physical activity, he or she would have integration’s problems and difficulties to express her or his ideas.
All to all, universities and colleges must share equitably finances between socials activities and classes, because both contribute to making student complete.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, i think, kind of, of course, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 276.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3152173913 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97437729447 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1678616191 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 5.45110844103 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196602434965 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673873146565 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103228035556 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11972673944 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13641129819 0.0645574589148 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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