Should art and music be compulsory subjects?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Schools
...ecomes reason for lack of concentration.Schools should give an option to select either ...
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Line 1, column 420, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...helps in concentration of other studies.As it became compulsory students will have...
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Line 1, column 420, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...helps in concentration of other studies.As it became compulsory students will have...
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Line 1, column 480, Rule ID: OUT_OF_THE_WAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'out-of-the-way'?
Suggestion: out-of-the-way
...ory students will have compulsion to do out of the way learning .It even lightens the mood of ...
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Line 1, column 503, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...compulsion to do out of the way learning .It even lightens the mood of schools ehi...
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Line 1, column 505, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...mpulsion to do out of the way learning .It even lightens the mood of schools ehich...
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Line 1, column 626, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...is key to score high in academic studies..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 43.0788530466 16% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 52.1666666667 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 526.0 1977.66487455 27% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 102.0 407.700716846 25% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1568627451 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.17797182781 4.48103885553 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2592104723 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 212.727598566 33% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696078431373 0.524837075471 133% => OK
syllable_count: 162.9 618.680645161 26% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 102.0 20.1344086022 507% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 526.0 100.406767564 524% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 102.0 20.6045352989 495% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.45110844103 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263942919774 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.263942919774 0.076458572812 345% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263942919774 0.150856017488 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 53.9 11.7677419355 458% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -32.05 58.1214874552 -55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 43.1 10.1575268817 424% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.41 8.01818996416 155% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 86.8835125448 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 10.002688172 600% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.8 10.0537634409 426% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 43.0 10.247311828 420% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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