I strongly disagree with the statement playing a game only when you win.And the reason behind my disagreement with this is because a person used to learn a lot from games they play.Game could be any one.It may be indoor or outdoor but both have their own benefits.For example if a person is interested in chess which is an indoor game actually its helpful for brain development.It helps in broadening of your analytical skills,it also sharpens the brain of individual and help in developing reasoning power.So if someone with the interest of chess won't play just in fear of loss in game,He is actually losing capacity to development of his brain and brain related decision making and thought processes.
Likewise if someone is interested in interested in running ,jogging,or taking part in race and doesn't participate in them just in fear of loss in game.He is losing in diverse ways in fact. There is numerous advantages of running .It tightens the muscle and makes them firm and healthy.Running is also a good exercise if someone desire of weight loss or want to burn his stored calories.Running in routine way not only helps in weight loss but it actually increases the blood circulation which helps in purifying of blood.Going outside for running also develop sociel interaction with new people and motivate to learn new techniques .they can share ideas and advantages of different strategies for health .
I believe playing a game is to learn n grow not to win.But we can set goals try to win also...
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tement playing a game only when you win.And the reason behind my disagreement with ...
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...reason behind my disagreement with this is because a person used to learn a lot from game...
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...ecause a person used to learn a lot from games they play.Game could be any one.It...
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...ed to learn a lot from games they play.Game could be any one.It may be indoor or ou...
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...utdoor but both have their own benefits.For example if a person is interested in ch...
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...ually its helpful for brain development.It helps in broadening of your analytical ...
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...s wont play just in fear of loss in game,He is actually losing capacity to developm...
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...decision making and thought processes. Likewise if someone is interested in interested ...
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...ught processes. Likewise if someone is interested in interested in running ,jogging,or taking part in race...
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...e is interested in interested in running ,jogging,or taking part in race and doesn...
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...te in them just in fear of loss in game.He is losing in diverse ways in fact. Ther...
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... muscle and makes them firm and healthy.Running is also a good exercise if someone desi...
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...ning is also a good exercise if someone desire of weight loss or want to burn his stor...
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...ation which helps in purifying of blood.Going outside for running also develop sociel...
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...ple and motivate to learn new techniques .they can share ideas and advantages of d...
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...tages of different strategies for health . I believe playing a game is to learn n...
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...ng a game is to learn n grow not to win.But we can set goals try to win also...
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... to win.But we can set goals try to win also...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, likewise, may, so, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 256.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88671875 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8669465603 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.1344086022 318% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 245.803274999 48.9658058833 502% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 312.75 100.406767564 311% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.0 20.6045352989 311% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 5.45110844103 294% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193165791061 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117324942916 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901081266639 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148578225361 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829071266502 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.6 11.7677419355 286% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.98 58.1214874552 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 10.1575268817 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.97 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.01818996416 130% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 10.002688172 580% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.0537634409 275% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.247311828 273% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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