I strongly agree to the above sentence that at universities and colleges ,sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support .
The reason behind supporting this view is colleges are packed up with diverse students.Not every student want to become scholar. Some are also interested in sports like Soccer, Basketball, Baseball etc. And they do represent colleges on different levels . So I believe these students talent should be encouraged by management of colleges and government too.Government to provide sufficient aid for the similar reason.So that students who join college team for any sports will be able to purchase required equipment, uniform, shoes .
For an example if a group is selected for basket ball team, they need proper uniform, shoes , gloves, jacket , quality training to learn in a good way so that they can lead college team to state level or national level. And if they win in state, national and international level they will bring name for college and nation as well.They will be reason for proud moment for country.
If colleges receive good financial support they can help students in getting good coach who can train the players in a focused way to prepare them to win for college and Country.
And social activities like corporate social responsibility can be performed by colleges and students which motivate everyone to become responsible for helping the needy. Plants can be planted by students to nurture the environment. All these activities are good for both individual and nation.
On a concluding note I can say support people, so people will support nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 269.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22676579926 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76913758573 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576208178439 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3172868741 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.166666667 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.45110844103 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130228990077 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684070583368 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122663891538 0.0737576698707 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115611947438 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15945791735 0.0645574589148 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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