Should government spend money exploring outer space?
Managing the government spending property has always been a concern for all countries in the worlds. Some nations spend a lot of money on outer space exploration, while others focus on providing the basic needs of their people. As far as I’m concerned, I believe that governments should spend more money on social benefits, education, and healthcare rather than wasting money in other aspects.
Of course, exploring the outer space and traveling to planets such as the Moon is surely very important to the human society. It increases our knowledge and understanding about the space and universe as a whole. However, exploring outer space which its result will emerge in the long run should be a secondary matter for governments who its people have basic needs problem. Government’s top priority should always be satisfying the basic needs of their people.
All country in the world ought to provide enough financial resources for schools. If there is no investment from government, children will not be well educated and they may not have an opportunity to go to a university. Depriving students of getting professional college education definitely have an adversely affect a country’s progress. Therefore, it is important to ensure that everyone will be able to pursue and fulfill his or her own educational goals. Universities should have the latest collection of books and up-to-date sources of information. All schools should build new classrooms and promote their facilities.
Another point that we should be making sure that the government will have enough spending for social benefits and the health care. We should construct more hospitals and rehabilitation centers both in the cities and in the countryside. In our country, there are many villages yet that are far from healthcare centers and it made problems to referrals, especially at winter. We ought to generate more money to guarantee the life of old people and disabled people. The government should also provide free health and medical care for all population. They have the responsibility to assist the poor people who do not have basic resources to survive. The state government should also help unemployed and underemployed individuals. The society itself will benefit from the expenditure of government toward social benefits. Furthermore, it will promote the economic growth and the development of all countries.
In conclusion, governments should spend less money on exploration of the outer space because it is less urgent. Instead, state governments have to concentrate their attention on social benefits as well as education for future generations. Financing social programs are no doubt their primary duty.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'needs'' or 'need's'?
Suggestion: needs'; need's
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: You used an adverb ('adversely') instead an adjective, or a noun ('affect') instead of another adjective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, no doubt, of course, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2279.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36235294118 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98775725681 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 703.8 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3461953478 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.16 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.12 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411368518251 0.236089414692 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107218068735 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127389324101 0.0737576698707 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258540581109 0.150856017488 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129502747904 0.0645574589148 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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