Should parents help their children with their assignments or let them do their assignments independently?
Nowadays education play a vital factor in each person future life, and parents who know this fact do their best to provide necessary situation and agent for improving their chidren's educational states. homeworks as a dispensible part of education is one of the important students' and their parents' concerns.In my opinion it is more benificial that student do their assigned homeworks bt themself.
first, students who are hepled during the process of doing their homework tend to be dependeble on their parents for study. Although some parents may think that the qualitu of student's homework will increase by their help and consequently, their children can get better grades, this idea is completely misleading . that is becuase the children would get use to a situastion in which all of the time that they face a challenge, there is some body who will help them. however, when they become older , they understand that there is not anybody that can help them except themself. For instance, due to a research that eas conducted in y country, it tured out that students who do their homework by themself when they were in primary school and their parents help them them only when the have specific question do better in highschools and universities in average. there underlying resean behind this observation is that in higher educational level parent know little about their lessens and those who got used to being help by others face a completely different situation.
second, parents' help may cause some problems in process of student's learning. The most prominant objective of homeworkes that are assigned by teachers is that teacher understand and learn student's errors and problems in regard to that specific part of lessen that these homeworkes designed for. for example when I was at primary school I had a lot of problems in understanding the consept of limit in mathmatics. through doing the assigned homework considerin this part, my father hepled me alot and I do al of them by hi help while I dod not unfderstand this art at all. cosequently my teacher thought that I learned tthis part perfectctly due to my homework and did not assigne me extera homework ehich could be so beneficial for me to learn this portion of math in a better way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97631578947 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69678870784 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518421052632 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4947876684 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.461538462 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2307692308 20.6045352989 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35189791678 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137137447283 0.076458572812 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091892087434 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248252054503 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992739051206 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.