Should people learn the foreign language by going to the country that speaks the language?

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Should people learn the foreign language by going to the country that speaks the language?

Submitted by ilda on Thu, 08/08/2019 - 11:32

There are many ways of learning a foreign languages. It is very important for people to learn a second language in their lives. Personally, I believe that it is extremely beneficial if people learn foreign language in the country in which it is spoken . I feel this way for a couple of reasons.

First of all, it is obvious that you can learn faster when you are surrounded by people that speak that language. Consequently, you will try to communicate and use their language in one form or another you would force yourself to use new words that you had learned in order to get through conversation. If we do not practice the language, we would not be able to learn to fast. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a child, my parents sent me to the Greece for vacation. I knew already how to speak in Greek language, but I never practice that much. As a result, I could not find my words that I needed to use in a general conversation. However, after one month of practicing with people who surrounded me. I was able to speak fluently and to fast. As the saying goes" I learnt with the flying colors"
That's why, I think that we could learn to fast if we are in the country where the language is spoken.

The second reason is because when we are in a foreign country we are curious to learn more about the culture of that place and for that we tend to learn more new words and we want to understand more. Therefore, our ability to quickly learn something that we are very interested in, it will encourages to learn to fast. For instance, when my brother was in university, he took Italian language class because he wanted to now more about their history. He spent only one month that summer learning the language. He was able to learn to fast because he wanted to understand and study about their history which he founded fascinating. For this reason, he learnt Italian very fast. In addition, he encourage me to learn that language because he thought that I should know more about their history too.

In conclusion, I am of the opinion that we learn faster and more if we are in the country where the language is spoken.

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
There are many ways of learning a foreign languages. It...
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Line 2, column 44, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'language'?
Suggestion: language
...re are many ways of learning a foreign languages. It is very important for people to lea...
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Line 2, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...age in the country in which it is spoken . I feel this way for a couple of reasons...
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Line 4, column 842, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s; I learnt with the flying colors' Thats why, I think that we could learn t...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...I learnt with the flying colors' Thats why, I think that we could learn to fas...
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Line 7, column 291, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'encourage'
Suggestion: encourage
...that we are very interested in, it will encourages to learn to fast. For instance, when my...
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Line 7, column 302, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learning'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: learning
... very interested in, it will encourages to learn to fast. For instance, when my brother ...
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Line 7, column 693, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'encourages'.
Suggestion: encourages
...arnt Italian very fast. In addition, he encourage me to learn that language because he th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5101010101 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5626674696 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429292929293 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2808499468 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1818181818 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305044831049 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971306474045 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952664354176 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215332145875 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864527637793 0.0645574589148 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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