Social media has more negative effects than positive effects on the young people behave.
Social media is something these days people use most of the time. It has a lot of influence on people’s life. Most of the people are on social media, which has created a greater impact on individual's life as they seek attention towards them. Its effect can be seen by people's action on it. Social media has more negative effects than positive effects on the young people. Do we agree or disagree? So, when considering whether social media has positive or negative effect on young people. I would have to say, it has positive effect.
The first reason is that, social media has provided a platform of presenting individuals opinion on the thing they like it or not. When people find some news or article posted on social media which they find good or do not agree, they write comments, why they do not like it or like it. For example, I remember when I was in high school, there used to be a page of our school, where school use to post articles related to our activities which we never did ad were never for any good. We used to present our opinions by writing comments. It created a way to mention the negative thing that school used to do and we got chance to speak up through social media. So, I believe social media plays an important role in presenting opinions.
The second reason is that it provide a platform to advertise or market our things. Social media provides a platform of thoussands of people of our community where we can advertise our materials or products. For example, When I used to job online shopping. I came to know about social media marketing. They used to design an image like an ad image and post it on Facebook. Then, by using their credit cards and creating Ad account Facebook provided a way of displaying the products around the mass of people and to the community we wanted. After certain days, I noticed that we started getting good results. many customers started calling us and it was amazing of advertising our products on social media. That is why social media plays an important role in providing s platform where we can be with the people for a good purpose.
Finally, I believe getting an option to place our views is important, and using those views to bring a change has a lot of impact. Also, getting ways to be with people around us whether near or far and making them to know about the work we do is fascinating.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
..., which has created a greater impact on individuals life as they seek attention towards the...
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Line 2, column 390, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...o be a page of our school, where school use to post articles related to our activit...
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Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...d that we started getting good results. many customers started calling us and it was...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4976744186 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41862254018 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455813953488 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8595212012 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.36 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.45110844103 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32212659159 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113945038534 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166802196565 0.0737576698707 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213908802338 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.229749585824 0.0645574589148 356% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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