Nowadays, people tend to be overwhelmed by tons of tasks, assignments and projects in their work, relationships and life. This triggers a subtle debate among them: whether spending more time alone could better or damage one’s relationship. Some people assert that undeniably being far away from people would do harm to one’s relationship. Nevertheless, as far as I am concerned, being in solitude would improve one’s relationship instead. My reasons and examples are as follows.
Firstly, being apart for more time could enable people to realize how much friends and families mean to us, thus cherishing them and enjoying a better relationship. People are inclined to take many things in life for granted, from mothers doing their landladies to close friends giving us a hand when we are in need. One day, when we find those we love start to leave us, we then start to regret and hope we could have treated them better when they are with us. Mothers are the ones who tend to neglect most but who, as a matter of fact, devote much of their love and time to us.
Second, being alone could offer both of us sometime to have more experiences in life, which would do good to people’s relationships. Even the closest friends may have nothing to say if they are glued to each other all day long. A meaningful and resonant conversation would only begin when friends have many topics to share. They could converse smoothly for several hours in a row without feeling bored and have nothing to communicate.
Admittedly, bring alone may also have some faults and flaws if they are apart for too much time. Couples could be divorced if they spend too much time alone; friends could turn into strangers if they live their lives separately and have nothing in common; families could feel not close if they leave each other for too long. One useful solution to this is to be apart for a certain amount of time not too long.
In a nutshell, I suppose that being apart for some time could do good to people’s relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, then, thus, i suppose, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8125 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61061460695 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517045454545 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0146809383 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6470588235 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264875637805 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980315271886 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086430876747 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166974388656 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796047284447 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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