Some items (such as clothes or furniture) can be made by hand or by machine. Which one do you prefer? items made by hand or items made by machine? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.
Many people think that it is a good idea to buy items with high quality either it was made by hand or machine. Personally, I prefer to buy items that is made by machine and not by hand. I feel this way for a couple of reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, machine-made items can be produced in short time. People can get their items within few days from their order. For example, I remember when I got married and I had to furniture my new house, I ordered two big coach and one huge bed from Amazon Company which make all their product with advanced machine. This order took only ten minutes to send it online, and it took two days to be at my new home. I was amazed how fast they were, so I tried to contact with the company and ask them about the fast manufacturing system that they have. The manager told me that they generate at least one hundred coach and beds everyday because they made them with very advance and sensitive machines. However, if someone ordered one coach that is hand-made, it would take at least three months to be fully ready because they are made by humans; these humans get tired during work, so they have to take break. Moreover, they have to get some sleep during the day unlike machines which can work all days without any rest.
Adding to the previous point, machine-made items is less expensive. Machine companies can produce large amount of clothes per day, so they offer them with affordable price. For instance, I bought t-shirt from clothes company called Zara. It cost me only $30 with very high quality. The consultant in the company told me that the company cut the price because they have many products that they need to sell. Everyday they produce at least two hundred new t-shirt with their company machine. However, home-made clothes are very expensive because people who made them take money for their effort and for the products too.
In conclusion, I believe that items made by machine is more beneficial for most people. This is because it is much faster to produce, and it is much cheaper than home-made items.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective, and the comma is missing. Did you mean 'every day, they'?
Suggestion: Every day, they
...e many products that they need to sell. Everyday they produce at least two hundred new t-shir...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, at least, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in short, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54232804233 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22796718973 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510582010582 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9264534632 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.85 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28689230512 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110888351157 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113658566882 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21391282271 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684581129401 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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