The technology is rapidly pacing in today's world. There are a plethora of innovations which came up during the 21st century across many fields - Medicine, Art, Science and many more fields. Smart phones are also one of its kind which is ubiquitous in the modern world. During the olden days having a telephone within a house used to be a great deal, but today, cell phones are carried by almost every individual. This is due to the fact that these smart phones provide many advantages and benefits to the people and make their lives easier. Thus, taking the pros the smart phones provide to the mankind into consideration, I agree that young children must be given smart phones.
In the first place, the smart phones work as an aid to the children in order to improve their knowledge. There are lots of web pages and educational websites available using which children can learn new things and practice them. For instance, I had a strong interest in learning a new programming language - Java while I was in the high school. I used my smart phone to dive deep into the internet and learn the key concepts of that programming language. I was able to write codes and get them verified by people who participate in the online discussion forums. Thus, I believe that smart phones help the children in learning new things.
Moreover, smart phones help the children to get in touch with their parents, relatives, and friends. For instance, my cousin who is in the 5th grade uses Whatsapp calling feature to inform his mother to pick him up from school. He also contacts many of his friends and teachers to get help in performing his homework. If this feature of internet calling was not available, he should have walked or traveled to his friends' homes to get help; which consumes a lot of time. Hence, cell phones help the students to connect with important people, serve as an aid in doing the homework and also saves time.
What's more, cell phones allow the children to participate in the activities pertaining to social services. There are a lot of volunteering works posted on social networking sites like Facebook, Twitter, and WhatsApp which allow people to participate in events like fundraising. These funds would be donated to the old age homes, orphans and the destitute. Thus, accessing the internet using mobiles encourage children to perform good deeds in life which would be useful to the betterment of the society in their future.
To conclude, cell phones are always advantageous to the children in many ways. Although there could be some drawbacks of its usage - like addiction, by parental intervention and monitoring, these could be prevented. Taking all the benefits cell phones provide the children into consideration - like access to wide range of knowledge, saving time, communicating with friends and teachers - cell phones are one of the important tools children need to utilize.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'benefits'' or 'benefit's'?
Suggestion: benefits'; benefit's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2416.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92057026477 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59927749507 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50916496945 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 743.4 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8476368508 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4583333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291877816693 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817683014037 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630449651518 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158294657978 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358926455712 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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