Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones (cell phones with Internet access), while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch. Which point of view do you think is better, and why?
Cell phones make easy way of communication in this world, but a parent should restrict the use of cell phones and allow only when a child is away from home, to the unknown world. Therefore, I think kids should be restricted to use cellphones especially the ones with internet.
Cell phones are addictive and creates health problem in kids. Excessive use of cell phones stresses one's eyes and make a child victim of migrain or any other stress related problems. Children do not have self control and therefore use cellphones excessively either to play games or to chat long hours on phone with their friends, this hinders with their physical activity, hence causing obesity and laziness in kids.
Internet has vast pool of knowlege and unrestricted knowledge. If a child's use of internet on cellphone or even any internet device is not monitored it can lead to several restricted knowledge for kids. As cell phones are personal device restricting the internet use could be a great deal of task for a parent.
Lack of cellphone use builds character in children. They get to see the world realistcally rather than virtually through mobile phones. Children vecome more communicative with their parents and learn respect and good manners.
Several infuential parents like former president of United States Mr Barack Obama and Founder of Microsoft Mr Bill Gates think that one should restrict their children from the use of cell phones. They opted to keep their kids away from cell phones till the schooling ended.
A parent should not fully refrain their kids to use cell phones as restriction creates resentment upon kids. They should allow specific hours for the use, probably for the school work or if they are going out or travelling alone. Technology is a miracle that effectively used generates the most fruitful outcome. Therefore, one should be very careful of their decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05111821086 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57785309568 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565495207668 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9883031301 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23529411765 5.45110844103 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230705894554 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828336026671 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503031708917 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133788238903 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312051607559 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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