Some first year college students do not have good study habits. Some people believe that colleges should provide all of the first year students with a required course to develop their good study habits. Other people believe that providing this kind of course is unnecessary. I think that it is necessary to provide students required courses.
Firstly, these courses can help college students form good study habits. This can also make college students' academic performance better, so that college students can graduate more easily. For example, my cousin, her study habit is not very good, but the school has set up corresponding courses to help her study. She also successfully graduated from school.
Secondly，the benefits of the course include the school itself. If the students' study habits are good, the school will become more popular. At the same time, schools will have more and better students. Some famous universities, for example, usually have similar courses to assist students' study. Then the reputation of the school gets bigger and bigger, and the students get better and better,it is a win-win thing.
Some people may think it is unnecessary to offer such courses, because college students already have enough classroom pressure. But in my opinion, good study habits can reduce students' pressure and make schools have better benefits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...le believe that colleges should provide all of the first year students with a required cou...
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Line 5, column 392, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
..., and the students get better and better,it is a win-win thing. Some people may ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, i think, kind of, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 52.1666666667 27% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 216.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31018518519 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48047502392 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550925925926 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6762774587 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.4666666667 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263126723631 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107441929418 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985865127465 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181573919938 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108121391796 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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