After the industrial revolution, the ever-changing technology makes people live a fast-pace life style. To adapting this circumstance, more and more popular books said that people should cultivate the adjusting skills like communication, cooperation and team work spirit than to pay attention in the solid professional knowledge in work. In my perspective, I believe that the knowledge in a field is the most important thing which would help people survives in the fiercely competitive labor market.
To begin with, the employers would expect their employees can have as much distributions as they can. Everyone needs to have essential abilities to grapple with projects by themselves. If someone cannot be an independent worker and solve problems by himself, other co-workers have to share his works and the human resource is hard to get the best arrangement. To be more specific, the worker would in the lay-off list if the company has the downsizing plan.
Additionally, a worker who pays attention to learn new knowledge and skills would become excellent and experienced in certain field as time goes by. The most valuable assets of a company are the talented staffs. They can conduct the difficult project and be the core-technical member, teach new staff, develop new product and make great efforts to a company. For instance, the founder of company Apple, Steve Job, had said that he would only invite the top experts to his team, since he is chasing for design the most incredible product in the world. As a result, the strong knowledge is the foundation stone to help people play an unshakable role in a job.
On the other hand, people should also stay concerned with the environment. Good communication skills can help us to express our opinions and cooperate with other departments. The abilities to adapt changing conditions can make us have different solutions and avoid some problems when the customer wants to modify their requirements.
In sum, the high level of competence would be beneficial and necessary to people. A person with critical skills can have more chances and be a crucial role in a work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ould expect their employees can have as much distributions as they can. Everyone nee...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
... his works and the human resource would is hard to get best arrangement. To be mor...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'get the best'.
Suggestion: get the best
...and the human resource would is hard to get best arrangement. To be more specific, the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12034383954 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87582033653 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578796561605 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5226811522 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.117647059 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197168503389 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544648161617 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526342562643 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985819768796 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072440734159 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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