Some people believe that newspaper is the best source of news. Others think that the news is presented better on radio or television.
Knowing and vigilance are human’s basic needs from old history until now. Nowadays, people know about their surrounding life from different sources. Some people like old habits and read newspapers to find out about recent events. However some others like to use more modern systems like televisions and radio or even social media for a better understanding of new events. I think that with human’s development its access to news dramatically altered. This incident is due to many reasons which made me support this idea.
First, new tools of news transmission let people access to their environment news more easily. They can hear or watch new things faster in radio or TV in comparison with old-fashioned newspapers. They won’t need to wait for every other day’s morning to buy their newspaper to read recent news.
Another important issue which we must consider is the news honesty. Normally, if you want to know about a specific matter, you would read about it in a newspaper page. However, people and mostly young generation find that radically wrong. Since, they believe that it just reflect the ideas of the page’s writer without letting the reader to know about it from any other aspect. Because of that newspapers popularity decrease gradually with people’s rising desire to watch TV or listen to radio.
Also, participation of all people in broadcasting an incident is found to become more crucial these days. Newspapers lack the possibility for sharing of its follower’s ideas. In recent technologies like social Medias, you can read about any event as soon as it happens since it in this technology any person can be a reporter and send their news to a huge amount of people all around the world. This facilitates people’s access to new events without any prejudgment or delay.
In conclusion, news broadcasting means change with development of human and their technologies. People understand that they can know deeply about everything without any obstruct. They can also participate in spreading of news which makes it far more different in our new world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...papers to find out about recent events. However some others like to use more modern sys...
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Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'newspapers'' or 'newspaper's'?
Suggestion: newspapers'; newspaper's
... from any other aspect. Because of that newspapers popularity decrease gradually with peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, even so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19883040936 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86034266097 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558479532164 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.041457984 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6666666667 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90476190476 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24425795986 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727381482962 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487263057685 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148256815211 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410125370951 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.