Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everyone seeks to achieve success in his life. There are many ways to be successful. Some people believe that taking risks or catching chances help them attaining the success. Others believe that success can be achieved by careful planning. For me, I think careful planning is the best way to be a successful person. Planning well saves a lot of time and also gives you the opportunity to prepare things ahead of time.
When you make a good plan for any task that you are going to do, it would save a lot of time. You can do many things in a certain time. For example, last weekend, I have a lot to do. I was thinking which task I would start. At the end of the day, I realized that I wasted half of my weekend thinking about taking decisions. If I have a to-do list, my day would be organized and I can take the advantage of my free time. If you have a plan, you do not waste your time in thinking. This experience taught me that time is free but it is priceless, so I have to plan well to use it carefully.
In addition to saving your time, good plans help you to be prepared ahead of time. I remember last month, our family decided to go for a picnic. Therefore, I have to prepare the food and all the stuff we are going to take with us to enjoy our day. Moreover, without planning, you would not be successful. I remember when our professor at university assigns us to do prepare for a presentation. This presentation would take not more than 15 minutes speech. However, the preparation for this day took me a lot of time to prepare. I had to go to the library and I was reading many books. I had to surf the internet to get many resources. After that, I had to summarize all information that I had collected. Finally, I had to practice well before the real presentation to be confident. Without all this preparation, my presentation would not be good and my grades might suffer even it is just a speech for 15 minutes. Good preparation and careful planning are the keys to your success.
All in all, sometimes taking risks or chances might give you the opportunity to show your skills and challenge yourself, but the best way to be a successful person is to set a good plan to save your precious time and to be well prepared.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to attain' or 'attain'.
Suggestion: to attain; attain
...ing risks or catching chances help them attaining the success. Others believe that succes...
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Suggestion:
...our day. Moreover, without planning, you would not be successful. I remember whe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reover, without planning, you would not be successful. I remember when our profe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uccessful. I remember when our professor at university assigns us to do prepare f...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.187234042553 0.229887763892 81% => OK
Verbs: 0.202127659574 0.158761421928 127% => OK
Adjectives: 0.063829787234 0.0866891130778 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0404255319149 0.046263068375 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.112765957447 0.0685040099705 165% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence)
Prepositions: 0.0808510638298 0.118717715034 68% => OK
Participles: 0.0340425531915 0.0351676179071 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58144554166 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.063829787234 0.0309702414327 206% => Too many infinitives.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0829787234043 0.0887237588012 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0234042553191 0.0209618222197 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0063829787234 0.0139019557991 46% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2241.0 2387.08602151 94% => OK
No of words: 423.0 408.028673835 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29787234043 5.86048508987 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.248226950355 0.338922669872 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.200945626478 0.251872472559 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141843971631 0.174417080927 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0851063829787 0.112833075102 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58144554166 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.524397521467 85% => OK
Word variations: 48.0575226809 59.2087087015 81% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1071428571 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5622178156 48.84282405 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0357142857 120.699889404 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1071428571 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.644075263715 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 35.2017055049 45.7405998639 77% => OK
Elegance: 0.850299401198 1.45489161554 58% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204998498694 0.300154397459 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.124642424476 0.103427244359 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0885310459653 0.0752933317313 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.428630159172 0.497263757937 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152761996652 0.151897553556 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767450168947 0.114077575197 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813181969735 0.0781384742642 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.401405594328 0.336927656856 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0828039582646 0.067059652881 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170825303424 0.210909579961 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081857844776 0.0618886996521 132% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Too many neutral sentences.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
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Rates: 66 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 20 Out of 30