In today's societies, the question of whether success comes from careful planning or just from taking a risks has become a controversial issue among people in many circles and camps. Different people have various types of responses to this topic based on their cultural, social, or even familial backgrounds. However, as far as, I'm concerned, I believe that just thorough scheduling can make people become prosperous for some reasons that I elaborate them in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the first thing comes to mind right off the bat is that proper plan works as a light in the dark path. If people don't have anything to turn their ways bright and clear, they will collide with a lot of obstacles. Having a program for the future act as this light for everyone. he can use it for preventing problems or solving them. Therefore, whenever people run and move just by chance, they don't expect a striking success in their life. Let's make a brief explanation about that. I remember that when I was in high school, I tried five times to get my TOEFL test certification but I couldn't succeed because I didn't have an appropriate plan for English studying. Therefore, planning is an integral part of the victory.
Another noteworthy aspect that should be mentioned is that when people have a program to attain something, they try harder and dedicate much time to their goals. As much as people engage in a specific subject, they can view and assess all perspective on that subject. Accordingly, they improve their knowledge and they become proficient on it. Thus, In this situation, getting a success is really feasible. Let me shed a light on my point. Based on the research that was published in a well-known journal, scientists determined that if someone engrosses in somethings, his brain arranges all of his body in order to get that objective. Hence, having a good plan encourage people to work harder.
In conclusion, there are a plenty of reasons to show that success is more accessible with exhaustive scheming than by chances and risks. Not only programming is necessary to avert difficulties or face with them but also it heightens the human's passion to try more. Consequently, it is imperative that people consider planning as a key factor in success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, really, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89147286822 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73832812723 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59173126615 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3518994298 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1428571429 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174425808614 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462320991753 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679854488577 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113221756151 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759317998549 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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