some people believe when bust parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork. Which one do you prefer?
The modern era has made parents too busy in which they just have a little time to spend with their beloved children. Spending that time has brought up a heated-debate among individuals whether it should be used in playing with kids or in doing things linked to schoolwork. Personally, it is my confirmed opinion that It is far better to spend that time on schoolwork for two concrete reasons which have been stated in the subsequent lines.
The first worthwhile mentioning reason is that the priority of parents is their kid's education in which how they are studying what they are learning and more critical is their progress in learning. In other words, for busy parents, it is paramount important to get ensure that their aged-school children are doing well in lessons. My situation as a single parent of two elementary kids is a great compelling example of this. I have two jobs that they left me just a little time to share with my kids. Moreover, my kids have plenty of time during the day to play and have fun at home or even in school. As a result, my first priority for parents at home is helping my kids by doing their schoolwork.
The second significant reason to support my point of view is that school-children expect their parent to take care of their educations as much as possible especially those who need more practice to handle courses. To be more specific, if children just have a limited time to spend with parents, they prefer to spend it on homework to get mastered in them. Back to my example as a single od to elementary kids, since there is no one else to help my children with their homework, I am the only person that they have to borrow a hand from, and of Corse, it is my responsibility. Every time I go back home after a full workday, they run to me with homework done in hands to be sure whether they have any mistakes or not thereby I always sense that how much they need me to help them with their schoolwork. Therefore, going to school and having homework to do, children expect parents to help them in doing schoolwork instead of playing games.
To wrap up what has been discussed, I am a strong believer that busy parents should spend their little amount of time with school- kids doing homework. I feel this way because not only the first priority for parents is their kid's education, but also children expect parents to help them with lessons.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, i feel, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53828306265 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.532197475 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452436194896 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2848191312 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9375 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311137908611 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127586698503 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658643688651 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225800632956 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459613631058 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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