State whether you agree or disagree with the following statement. Then explain your reasons, using specific details in your explanation.
Some people prefer to go to the movie theatre; others prefer to rent a movie, which do you think is better and why? Include reasons and details to support your explanation.
Choosing how to do entertainments in our free time, sometimes becomes a big concern among social members. While some people are into going to movie theaters to spend their spare time watching a film, some others believe that renting a movie is far better. Personally, it is my firm conviction that renting movies has more edges compared to attending the cinema. Stating in the ensuing paragraphs, I will elaborate on my standpoint through two conspicuous rationals.
The first worthwhile mentioning reason to champion my stance is that renting a movie could serve us with saving both time and money whereas needless to mention, going to the cinema could be a consuming time and money activity. In the other words, to go to the movie theater we have to take a taxi to commute, which not only costs more money on top of the tickets but also takes more time. However, in the case of renting a movie non of these are considerable. My personal experience as a big fan of movies is the epitome of this. Being a student in the college, three years before now, I used to go to the cinema a lot that brought arise some difficulties of managing my time to study and budget since the nearest movie theater took me an hour to commute. Consequently, taking a page from my roommate in the dormitory, I shifted to watching rental movies in which I managed to have enough time studying my lessons and saving a little amount of money every month. As a result, It can be inferred obviously that rental movies are more economical and time-saving.
The second notable point to support my outlook is that renting a movie allows us to watch it in the place and time we prefer. To be more precise, Some people would like to watch movies in a quiet environment since makes it easy to follow the movie step by step without any interruptions. In stark contrast, cinema is fully capable of unforeseen disruptions that can cause losing the movie at all. My brother is a compelling instance to further elaborate on this. While watching a movie, He is a sensitive person that any kind of noise can take away his attention from the movie. Last year we went to the cinema, he could not bear the environment of the cinema just because of leaving someone in the middle of the film blocking his sight or the noise of eating snacks by other people around us so he left before the end of the movie. From that time he always rent movies to watch in his noiseless room laying on his comfort chair without any disruption.
To wrap up what has been discussed, I reckon that renting a movie is more preferable than attending the cinema. I feel this way because rental movies are more economical and time-saving. Besides, a rental film proved us with the opportunity to watch the movie somewhere we can focus on movies little by little with no disturbance.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, second, so, whereas, while, i feel, i reckon, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2315.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 504.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59325396825 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59615945855 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498015873016 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 754.2 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6268284974 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.238095238 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206000828516 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707290565781 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488651393756 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145206274325 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223917142247 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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