Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or country because they lose their old friends.
Migration has a long history in human being's civilization, even more. In this case, some travel willingly to explore the world, and some by force to save their lives. personally, I strongly support moving from one place to another for its tangible benefits one of which is acquiring first-hand knowledge. Looking in more detail, those who are living in developing countries probably do not have access to advanced science thereby going to developed countries to obtain advanced knowledge in their dream field of study. As a cooling example of this claim, my brother comes to my mind. Several years ago, he traveled to the USA to study Landscape architecture at one of the most prestigious universities worldwide. After 3 years of assiduous studying, he came back with a Ph.D. which is not offered in my country. As a result, had he not traveled to the US, he would not have received his Ph.D.
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examples are too long. need more arguments
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