Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
The young generation is the most valuable part of every society in which their role in the community is a heated debate among elders. Opinions are divided as to whether youngsters are helping the community they are living as much as old times or not. Personally, it is my confirmed conviction that young people devote enough time to help the community for two conspicuous reasons stated in the following essay.
The first worthwhile reason to be mentioned is that nowadays compared with the last decades, youngsters have more freedom in their decisions to make. To be more specific, today's youths can participate in any society's activity without coming back to their parents' opinions. Consequently, helping communities has become much easier since young people make their minds what to do by themselves, independently. I, as of today's youth, compared with my father, for instance, I have more independence in making the decision that has led to being more able to participate in society's activities and Devoting enough time to helping the community. Whereas, my father always complains that his parents determined whether he helps other people or not. Never had I have such today's freedom in making decisions, I could have more limitations in helping the community as my father.
The second Obvious reason to be noted is that youths start their personal life sooner in comparison with in the past years. In other words, youngsters have more free time while in the past they have to stay with their family even after their marriage. Therefore, young people in the past were more occupied with the family's obligations. MY brother, for example, is an apt illustration of this. he did not leave home after getting married and had to care for two families at the same time so he could not help other people as should be. having left home and had his personal life, my brother would be able to help the community around him because he would have more spare time.
To wrap up what has been discussed, I strongly believe that youngsters give much more time to cooperating with their communities rather than in the last decades. Because they not only have more freedom in their decision but also they have more free time to give a hand to the society they are living in.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...bate among elders. Opinions are divided as to whether youngsters are helping the community th...
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Line 3, column 763, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...er people or not. Never had I have such todays freedom in making decisions, I could ha...
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Line 5, column 395, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...xample, is an apt illustration of this. he did not leave home after getting marrie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, so, therefore, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87338501292 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57635049558 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498708010336 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3385015045 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.941176471 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7647058824 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278819122132 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100410640643 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06323645374 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184294535858 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457794231409 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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