Children are most important part of parents' life. Fathers work from day to night and mothers do household task in their busy time; The target of parents is to cultivate effective children in a way that they can honor them in their future's life. Some people believe that children should study in parents’ busy time while others disagree. From my point of view, I deeply believe that parents must force their children to do schoolwork task rather than playing games and in what follows I will attempt to address the most discernible reasons.
First, they can learn more and this would be illuminated in their exam's time. Accordingly, wasting time by watching ineffective series or playing video game is not beneficial. Although that sport is important in child career but if a person give 24-hour gross time to his child and ask him about playing game or studding hard, he would choose a way to just waste his time. For example, the time that I was child, I can remember that I was a fan of football video game and each time my mother left me alone, immediately I put the book on the cage and just play, however this experience changed to a basic information for my brother to avoid wasting his time and as a result of it he could take the first place in university entrance exam.
In addition, if children deal with their homework, they will be more safe than other choices. In fact, playing video game and other sport can have some intrinsic diseases. For instance, last night I saw a documentary about the effect of video game on children. In this way, the program illustrate how children get anxious and this initiate some other mental injury. The program had some recommendation for children that the best one has been elected as increasing the time of study. This was the place that I understood the importance of studying in children. Therefore, children must not be allowed to spend their time on inefficient program like video game and sport but instead schoolwork tasks.
Finally, the atmosphere of the home is completely serene the time that children studying. Indeed, children can do sport even in the middle of hall and this make house noisy in which influences neighborhood. For example, my nephew always play football in the time that my sister is busy with her household tasks. The persons who live in the lower story always complaint us due to noisome job. So., if my nephew stops playing and doing sport and deals with his assignment he would help family to live in peace.
All in all, as the aforementioned reasons have illustrated, children should spend their time on school tasks in the time that their parents are busy. Not only do they able to learn more but also it helps them to live safely and have a serene situation. So, I think it is time to force our children to keep on with their schoolwork.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2342.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 499.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69338677355 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.503865069 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486973947896 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 715.5 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0853736266 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.826086957 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6956521739 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26086956522 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392250328284 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118872161021 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676040005039 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23062552995 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585433473098 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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