With the accelerating development of societies, new regulations are implemented in different parts. Some people believe that these rules are more severe to young people in comparison to the past young generations while the others not. From my perspective, I think that nowaday's youngsters are under strict pressure and in what follows I will attempt to address the most discernible reasons.
First, the development of societies has enforced new regulations and rules that did not exist in the past. These rules are strictly hard to follow due to the number of people living in a society. Indeed, the population provide rules to be stricter. Take a youngster commuting from one part of a city to another part. In the past, the number of vehicle such as, bus and automobile were not as much as nowadays and as a result it was not necessary to set bunches of strict rules. However, today, the huge amount of public and private transportation deserve strict rule to prevent traffic jam. Therefore, youngsters should follow some strict rules such as limited driving hours and driving in the middle of the lanes.
Second, fourty years ago, people in my country broke the democracy to Islamic country, and as a results girls and boys should follow more strict rules. Actually, now, the regulations are applied to wearing while it does not exist in the past. For instance, in my country 'Iran', women should wear Chador and men are not allowable to wear T-shirt. These regulations are embedded in Islam religion and every single person who comes to my country whether if she/ he is Muslim or not should follow this strict rules. Hence, in my country youngsters are indulged with strict rules and more than the pasts.
Third, by the emergence of technology, people go to university to get prepared helping industry in the soon future. What's more, the universities set numerous strict rules to increase students' knowledge. This category does not exist in the past and youngsters are encountering new severe limitation. For instance, students should pass over 144 course to get their bachelor. The regulation assert that every student should take 10 of 20 to get pass and at least grade point average of 14. Hence, students should study hard and stay out late to achieve good results. Therefore, nowaday’s young people are facing more strict regulations that pasts' people.
All in all, as the above-mentioned examples have illustrated, young people are encountering much more strict rules compared to the youngsters living in the past. Not only new social regulation forced them strict regulations but also special wearing and industries' need make them under pressure to follow severe rules.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, while, at least, for instance, i think, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2254.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07657657658 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68689823492 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506756756757 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3543745969 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9166666667 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194460415864 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592837468749 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510757635993 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124263964208 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411598873815 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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