There is a great debate whether people like to buy food at restaurant or they prefer cooking meal at home. I believe that cooking meal at home is way better that buying food at a restaurant. In this essay, I will address three potential reasons to support my claim.
First of all, cooking at home provides you quality time to spend with your family members. It really helps to strengthen your bond with your family members. For instance, we always cook meal at our home. It gives me chance to talk about my day with my mother, I tell my father what new things I learnt on the day and he also tells me the how his day went. My grand father teaches us how to make small slices of potatoes and to make new dishes. We held a competition on every weekend to cook the meal and my mother rewards us by giving chocolates. This activity has helped us to know more about each other and has helped us to understand each other more.
Secondly, there are news every now and then that the food served at restaurants are bad and are unpalatable. Similarly, the food cooked at the restaurants contain many chemicals like ajinomoto which are harmful to our health. Likewise, the food served at many places aren't even hot and people often have to eat cold food. For instance, me and my friends went out for dinner on a restaurant, the service was very poor we waited for our food for about half hour. Not only that, the food was cold at contained nails, though the owner apologized but it is clear that the food at restaurant are not eatable often.
Lastly, the ,main reason of people going to eat at restaurant is because it takes a lot of time to prepare meal at home, but with the invention of can food and other dry foods, people can now cook at their own home with less time at effort. On the bright side they also have the chance to spend quality time with their family. Meal prepared at home will neither be expired nor be stale. It will be safer and healthier in the absence of chemicals.
Thus. I feel that cooking meal at home is always more convenient than having your meal at a restaurant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, lastly, likewise, really, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, thus, for instance, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3676092545 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25732119389 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503856041131 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9510130986 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.95 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.45 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313171106212 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105662436046 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103808092304 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203260817938 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855256774109 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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