Many people wonder whether a teacher can be both popular and effective in helping students in learning. In my opinion, in this era a teacher can be both popular among the students and be effective. In this essay I will address three potential reasons to support my claim.
First of all, in this technological advanced era, teachers and students have become very close via social medias. Similarly, schools have also become cautious regarding this matter and try their best to be close with the students. Likewise, the teachers are also using various incentives to make them close towards the students and have succeeded also. For instance, our math teacher was the most popular teacher among the students. He made a really cheerful environment while he was in the classroom. He used to do a small fun segment in the last 15 minutes of our class which was related to formulas on different subject matter. Not only that he was really a fun loving person, when we complained about maths problem he created a group on facebook and helped us,he also organized plans for students birthday. He even used to make decisions on our favor and always supported us. I clearly remember when we were in grade 9 he organized a hiking program and on that program we really got chance to know each other.
Secondly, nowadays as the social media are very popular the teachers are also attracted towards them. Teachers can create a group all the members of the classroom on the whatsapp and help the children in the way they like. Teachers really show their creativity on the classroom, either starting a class with a funny joke, or telling some riddles that create a laugh and a sense of warmth in the classroom.
Lastly, many teachers share their life story with their students which make them feel more closer towards him. Hence, they will also be encouraged to share their problem with teachers and get solution. This connection between the students and teachers really friendly and the teacher will ultimately be popular among the students. And the students always count the hours for their favorite teacher's class.
In conclusion, based on my personal experience I corroborate the statement that a teacher can be both popular and effective in helping students in learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, lastly, likewise, really, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89322916667 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51181966112 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494791666667 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7362184743 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.95 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29435033958 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103869401209 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887154722096 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208066115534 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910437470951 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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