There is a great debate about whether reading fiction or watching movies is more enjoyable. In my opinion, watching a movie is more enjoyable. In this essay, I will address three potential reasons to support my argument.
First of all, a movie depicts the imagination we think while reading, on the screen. For instance, I read the novel 'Me before you' which I thought was not that good but when I watched the movie I was amazed looking at it. The movie presented the characters so raw and exactly like I had imagined. Because of this, I watched the movie more than once and really enjoyed it. But if anyone ask me to read the novel again then I would probably not read it.
Secondly, the music and the cinematography of the movie engages the audience throughout the movie and they won't get bored. The music plays as a key factor in the whole movie as it connects the audience with the emotion of the actors. Moreover, the music creates visually pleasing moments on the screen whether it is a romantic moment between the cast, emotional scene or dramatic climax. Consequently, whenever a person hears the music used on the movie he will remember the scene and enjoy it.
Lastly, the acting of the actors really keep the audience on their seat throughout the movie. The acting of the actors make the story look so real that people can't help but feel sorry for them when they are hurt. Likewise, they feel happy when they are happy and sad when they are sad. Viewers while watching the movie feel like they are on the movie and living their imagination. Clearly they enjoy every minutes of the movie than reading a book.
In conclusion, watching a movie is more enjoyable than reading a novel and makes you feel like you are a part of it which can never happen while reading a novel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, lastly, likewise, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54347826087 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34745018188 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506211180124 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6175727784 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2777777778 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05555555556 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140837393699 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530103215243 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598133890216 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102812078472 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710803054222 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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