Some people like different friends. Others like similar friends. Compare the advantages of these two? Kinds of friends which kind of friend do you prefer?
People meet different persons during their period of life. Generally, most of a person’s friends were found in his young age. Some of people like to have many friends and hangout with them. However, some others tend to limit their circle of friends to few numbers of persons who have close bonding with that person. Each of these attitudes has their advantages and disadvantages.
Choosing to have a large number of friends which always be around you may help you to learn many experiences. It also can provide you with variety of ideas that assist you to thrive during your life.in addition; it would be beneficial when you face a disaster or trouble. Since, there will be a lot of folks to help you go through it. Mainly, a large number of friends with different opinions can help you make better decisions in group work activities.
In the other hand, normally, it may have some disadvantages too. It can harm your self-confidence since, so many people may judge you without any consideration. Also, they will take most of your day and even night routinely. this would cause some serious issues in your future life consequently. Trusting is another matter which affects most of the relationships. Different friends become your friend with different intentions, as you enlarge the circle of your friends your trust can decrease about some of them, as they may tell you something that you do not like and conclude it as a misleading. An important factor that should not be missed is satisfaction. As your number of friends grow it will be difficult to satisfy them because different persons with different manners have certainly different expectations from you as a friend. If you choose to have many friends you must accept the fact that your secrets may be so much more in danger. Therefore, if you have many hidden thing in your life it would be better to have less friends.
In conclusion, friendship and making friends is so much crucial especially for young people. Each of these theories have their advantages and disadvantages. But I believe that having a few close similar friends can benefit and assist a person far better in his life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the people') or simply say ''Some people''.
Suggestion: Some of the people; Some people
...;s friends were found in his young age. Some of people like to have many friends and hangout w...
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Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...s tend to limit their circle of friends to few numbers of persons who have close b...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... and disadvantages. Choosing to have a large number of friends which always be around you may ...
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Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...al when you face a disaster or trouble. Since, there will be a lot of folks to help y...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...olks to help you go through it. Mainly, a large number of friends with different opinions can hel...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...t of your day and even night routinely. this would cause some serious issues in your...
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...that you do not like and conclude it as a misleading. An important factor that should not be...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rent expectations from you as a friend. If you choose to have many friends you mus...
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Line 5, column 1030, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun friends is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...in your life it would be better to have less friends. In conclusion, friendship a...
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Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...assist a person far better in his life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8722826087 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69134116845 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508152173913 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0891517925 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278247754441 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852823639726 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628302941178 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171140894729 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460080019044 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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