Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer? give specific reasons and examples to support your choice
I prefer to try new things and take risks rather than do what I already do well. I would prefer this for the reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, doing things which you already know might eventually get boring as you know it very well and you won’t have any challenges to look up to when you do it. When you try out something new, you might face a challenging situation that will make it enjoyable. I want to give an example from my own experience. I am very much good at algebra. There is no question which I couldn’t solve. But, later, I got bored doing algebra and didn’t feel like doing it, so I started trying calculus questions which are very challenging for me. I still struggle with it, but I enjoy doing it.
Furthermore, trying new things will make a person develop proficiency in more than one arena. Yes, no doubt that when you try something new, you will have to work hard to master it, but you might gain an additional skill. This can be an advantage to you from a career perspective. Also, people always love an all-rounder. Drawing from my example, I have always been terrific in academics, but sports is a big no. However, in grade 11, I joined basketball classes and decided to give it a shot. Now, I am a professional basketball player, and I play in state-level competitions.
Lastly, I think that people who are always ready to try new things other than doing that with which they are comfortable can adapt to changes better. It is easier for them to adjust to a new country, school, or office. It is also easier for them to adapt to new colleagues at the workplace because they embrace changes without any hesitation. Also, those people who do things that they already know might miss out on some great things in life.
To sum up, people should get up from their comfort zones and try out new things and take risks in life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, look, so, still, well, i think, no doubt, you know, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49710982659 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51794986101 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520231213873 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9331687906 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0952380952 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4761904762 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419347733778 0.236089414692 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110769011451 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119138471638 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244370271025 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120399045918 0.0645574589148 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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