Some people like to do their everyday shopping at large supermarkets. Others want to go to several small stores or local markets to buy what they need. Which style of shopping do you prefer and why? Give reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is a great debate about whether going to small stores daily is more worthwhile than going to supermarkets. I personally believe that, although opting for local markets sometimes is more practical, going to supermarkets is the best option. The second option is not only more affordable but more rentable - impacting directly on the monthly budget.
In the first place, choosing a large market for your shopping could be way more economical. In this shop’s category is easier to find promotional products, for the sake of the larger scale reposition. For example, in my house, my parents prefer going to a specific supermarket chain rather than our street’s store because, since they choose to buy supplies monthly to save time, it is more likely to find a good discount offer on wholesale products in supermarkets.
Secondly, a supermarket chain is less likely to grapple with a reposition problem. On the grounds of a huge amount of resources, the certainty of finding your essentials is more precise. A local market, for instance, might pass through a high demand and, consequently, a shortage. Furthermore, big markets might have some very exclusive products which are not available in smaller shops. My sister and I prefer a specific soda flavor and my mom has already left a lot of local stores empty-handed after going looking for it. Thus, her preference enhances on account of this improbable lack of something.
Therefore, in summary, I strongly feel that going to a supermarket for our everyday shopping is more beneficial. I feel this way not only regarding an economic analysis and, as a result, the budget’s relief, but taking into account efficiency and quality as well.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in summary, as a result, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 279.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09318996416 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89482076214 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0213668094 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5714285714 5.45110844103 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191316251577 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651473867578 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413370463467 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113066141271 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292100036934 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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