Some people like to follow there dreams and while some people want to be practical in their life Choose one

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Some people like to follow there dreams and while some people want to be practical in their life . Choose one ?

The people who have faith in there dreams are the one who can turn them into reality. I believe if we have a dream then we should follow it , no matter how much challenging it is but we much puts efforts in order to achieve it. But to follow the dream we must have faith on ourselves and our dream then only we can turn it into reality.

We are surrounded by people who have followed there dream and touched new heights. No matter how unrealistic our dreams may be but if we have will to achieve it then no one can stop us form conquering it. One of the biggest example of this century is Ellon Musk, an entrepreneur and engineer by profession. He has revolutionized the automobiles and Space industry by his unconventional ideas implemented into a classic products. But nothing comes easily, everything has its cost and dreams have to be paid with hard work and proper planning.

Many times people think of doing unconventional things but then with a sense of loosing they give up to there dreams. This should not be the case with us, we must be ready to un-turn all stones that come in our way. On the other hand being practical is also necessary in life. A dream without an practical approach can never be achieved. If one wants to become the president of United States then he can just achieve it in one few or few months. He need to be practical as well because that position decide the fate of a whole country and it cannot we given to anyone. One must prove himself worthy and so with practical mind one can achieve his dreams no matter how different they are.

So I with sum up by saying that we should always follow our dreams but with an practical approach.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...we have a dream then we should follow it , no matter how much challenging it is bu...
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Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...atter how much challenging it is but we much puts efforts in order to achieve it. Bu...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'product'?
Suggestion: product
...tional ideas implemented into a classic products. But nothing comes easily, everything h...
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Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...also necessary in life. A dream without an practical approach can never be achieve...
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Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...hould always follow our dreams but with an practical approach.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38906752412 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45971612231 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508038585209 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.6433267718 48.9658058833 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.3125 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222635603377 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086798242286 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044836124583 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14358214544 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467996005959 0.0645574589148 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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