Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social networking sites Other people prefer not to create such records Which approach do you prefer and why Use specific reasons and examples to supp

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Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social-networking sites. Other people prefer not to create such records.Which approach do you prefer, and why?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Personally saying, I prefer to record my experiences in social-networking sites. Some people might say that it is not a good idea because these experiences might be used by vandals or corruptors in the system. They are right, but as I think if the social-networking sites are protected and checked well, and those experiences use in the right way, this sharing information will have an excellent result.
For example, I am a university student. I have worked on many projects in different labs of the university. I can share my experience when I faced a problem in the lab, or when I got a useful result while I was working on a general test that can be used by other students. In this way, I can help other people at university. On the anther hand, if the university solves the problem, the cost of a test will decrease.
For another example, when I was gone to a park, I saw peoples who were destroying the trees by firing or breaking the branches. I shared this event on social networking sites because, in this way, I can inform the park security and other people that this work is not accepted by many people like me also, the park managers will have a check on the park more accurately.
Finally, by recording and sharing my experience at my work in a company, I could have corrected my coworker's mistakes. As a result, the company will benefit, and as the consequence, I will take advantage.
As I exampled and explained, recording experience and other information on social networking sites will have a good response to society.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, well, while, for example, i think, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 273.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64468864469 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94056844858 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4373680395 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5384615385 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253215990796 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915164496798 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869629225698 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158652702757 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086856015223 0.0645574589148 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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