Some people pay money for the things they want or need. Other people trade products or goods for what they need. Compare the advantages of these two ways of obtaining things. Which way do you prefer?
People tried to use different tools as money for trading and business during centuries. Some nations requested goods and traditional commodities of their area as money. These products had their own benefits and disadvantages accordingly. I think that paper based money which was invented after these periods can strongly help people for doing their business easier and managing their financial status realistically. Since, money made everything easier due to many logical reasons.
First, money help everyone including governments to value each product manufactured in its country correctly. This helps any individual to buy any specific good for an established price. For example, if you buy a bottle of wine for 2 dollars, it should be 2 dollars in every shop around that city. So, no one can sell any product to a higher arbitrary price.
Another reason which we should take into account is the paper monies shape, size and material. When you trade your product for something other than money, it may have a special material that could be rotten or deteriorate and lose its value eventually. It may have a huge size and cannot be stored properly in any storing facility. In fact, money has a constant value which won’t lose its credit and value if anybody stores it. Also, it is invented in such a way that you can transfer it comfortably. You can give as a lone to any person and get it back later without losing its value. Even you can invest it anywhere you like in any project which will return your money with its benefit. However, other products lack these benefits and therefore,they were put aside in history.
Nowadays, with developments occurred in electronics and computers, paper monies were altered to digital currencies which can be managed easily. They can be sent to other countries without any concern regarding their inherent merit. New currencies have been invented by societies’ enhancements that meet their demand and needs in a developed community.
In conclusion, materials which were used for trading and the paper money which we use have their own pro and cons. But, with economies’ development the need for an established constant thing as a valueable tool found to be necessary.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 417, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...g their financial status realistically. Since, money made everything easier due to ma...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to include' or 'include'.
Suggestion: to include; include
...reasons. First, money help everyone including governments to value each product manuf...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 752, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...oducts lack these benefits and therefore,they were put aside in history. Nowadays,...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09264305177 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78136910116 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58583106267 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7167064903 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9545454545 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6818181818 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.40909090909 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270147765684 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074507649673 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467426485355 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142689503519 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447364121466 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.