Some people prefer to eat meals at restaurants, while others prefer to prepare and eat food in their own homes. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
What is the difference between eating at home or in a restaurant? Due to the paramount importance of the food, efforts for elevating its effectiveness have always been among the top priorities of specialists. In this regard, on the one hand, many people prefer to spend their time in the restaurant, and on the other hand, many others want to stay at home and provide their food. Like many individuals, I believe that preparing food at home will provide numerous positive results. I will delve into two conspicuous reasons to elaborate on my standpoint.
The first reason that makes me hold the belief that cook at home is favorable is related to creativity. Undoubtedly, the human mind works base on analytical processes, and it is ready for challenges. In addition, it accepts new things as much as possible. Regarding many people`s ideas, when a person tries to cook, especially new food, by himself, just signal his mind for a new positive dilemma. Therefore, through cooking, not only can we challenge our minds, but also by providing a new situation, we force it to solve the issue in a new or even creative way. It is the reason why expert chefs always have their own secret ways of cooking. Without a doubt, their minds successfully analyze the process and create their own way. Although many critics may challenge this idea and debate that cook simple food never provide such an innovative situation for a person, an increasing number of individuals who try to introduce new foods or at least make their own path for cooking, show the other side.
Another equally noteworthy reason to bear in mind is the health side that many people care about. As we all know, people`s diet and lifestyles tremendously have changed. Nowadays, people much more take care of their bodies than they did before. Although the number of people who fall in love with junk foods is remarkably increasing, the number of people who try to behave their body as a pressure thing noticeably has increased as well. Thus, for the majority of people who believe their body is worthy, preparing food at home, assure them the food contains all the healthy ingredients they want in it. Take my personal experience as an example. A couple of years ago, my friend and I used to go fast food. Once, she decided to change her lifestyle into a healthy one, and she never put it aside. Surprisingly, these days, she lost weight, and now she has both healthy and good body shape.
To summarize, contemplating all remarks, we can safely conclude that preparing food at home for many people is a situation that they can show their creativity, also it Also, it can consider as an indication of healthy food for them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, at least, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2253.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8347639485 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68457337124 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538626609442 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7121138994 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9565217391 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2608695652 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5652173913 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196367616468 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536288796348 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470912615714 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122770627472 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043551926385 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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