Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
Lifestyle, as we all know, for the majority of people becomes a controversial subject. Due to its paramount importance, efforts for elevating its quality have always been among sociologists` top priorities. In this regard, many people support this opinion that these days, lifestyle is more comfortable than it was in the past. Similarly, I believe that various elements of modern lifestyles, such as modern technologies and modern psychology, provide positive changes to people`s lifestyles nowadays. I will delve into two conspicuous reasons to elaborate on my standpoint.
The first reason that makes me hold the belief that people enjoy a more comfortable lifestyle now is modern technology. People, undoubtedly, are going to invent much simpler ways to elaborate lifestyles. For instance, the invention of the smartphone in comparison with the previous generation`s innovations is a revolutionary phase, and these inventions change life in many ways. These days the public does not look at this new technology as a communicating tool; rather, they seize this opportunity to getting information even from distant countries. Obviously, these facilities never exist in grandparent’s era. Although many critics may challenge this notion and suggest that modern lifestyle brings not only favorable effects on life but also make life harder, individuals the satisfaction of life show different aspect. Scientifically reading, easier accessibility of the public to everything, makes them happier than the last generation was.
Another equally noteworthy reason to bear in mind is the effect of modern psychology methods on improving life. While individuals are inborn with a natural instinct to communicate with each other, as a result of the modern era, they have less opportunity to find a group to belong, unfortunately. Obviously, one`s need for psychology is increased in recent years, but modern techniques that psychologists use are much more sophisticated and influential. Moreover, lifestyle has changed, and people prefer to spend their time alone. Take my personal experience as an example. A couple of years ago, it was distinguished that I suffer from depression. My psychologist advised me to experience a different atmosphere to make new friends. Since I am an introvert person, I never want to share my privacy with others as long as I can. Thus, through an artificial sleep, she provides me, I could handle that malfunction. Therefore, without spending time to founded new people, I recovered myself by new methods.
To summarize, contemplating all remarks, we can safely conclude that modern lifestyle through better facilities and psychological aids make life both easier and comfortable.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2333.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60817307692 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31467286667 2.67179642975 124% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7704472059 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.434782609 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0869565217 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04347826087 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13689985583 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378451497579 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035074310722 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789857711123 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255968203749 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 10.9000537634 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 86.8835125448 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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