Some people prefer to live in the country. Others prefer to live in the town or big cities. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Since the down of humanity, human beings have been looking to convenient and proper accommodation to spend life; from caves and jungles to luxury palaces and long skyscrapers which all have their merits and demerits. In this regard, lots of hot debates arise for whether city life is better or being resident of countryside. Despite some advantages of living in suburb, I subscribe to the view of those who prefer living in towns and in what follows, I substantiate my reasons for this viewpoint.
The first reason to be mentioned is that in contrast to rural places, cities have provided numerous facilities by which have attempted many rural people to migrate to the cities to get advantages of these facilities. With advent of technology, the rate of conveniences and accessibility to high-tech equipment has increased abruptly and more people ignore the healthy-village-life to make use of these facilities in their lifes. For instance, through the use of internet and computers, not only can people keep touch together, but also they can easily do their routine affairs such as shopping online. Moreover, establishment high-equipped hospitals and medical centers have led people to be citizens of big urbane areas. More facilitated transportation give some distinct advantages for city life over living in the country.
Another privilege of the city life can be attributed to the wide range of opportunities for finding job and carrier. With expansion of cities, the demands for more occupations would increase and this motivates people with less income to move to the cities provided with more job opportunities. The casual jobs in rural areas were either farming or animal husbandry which weren’t money-making jobs. Likewise, these jobs were inherited from their ancestors, rural people didn’t have choice to pursue their dreams and desires and do the tasks according to their abilities and talents. Thus, accommodation in cities meet their requirements to follow their wishes.
To put it briefly, contemplating all factors and reasons, one soon realizes that big cities are the most ideal places to challenge life’s difficulties. Dwelling in cities provides both exploitation of more progressive equipment and engaging with more carriers and success. With all of these benefits about citizenship, is there still anyone who prefers to live in countryside?
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, if, likewise, look, moreover, so, still, thus, well, for instance, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31358024691 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98026430181 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567901234568 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3680349164 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313233577433 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138304719557 0.076458572812 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182489479841 0.0737576698707 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280196406215 0.150856017488 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.361644268371 0.0645574589148 560% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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