Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Why?
If I were to choose, I would live in an area with unchanging weather all the year. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, I do not need to buy new suitable clothes for different weather conditions. There are many pieces of clothing made of various materials that help your body keep its temperature moderate and feel comfortable in different kinds of weather. For instance, in a hot climate, you should wear lightweight and light-colored clothing, which allows your body to sweat and release heat and moisture. In contrast, it is necessary to wear thick clothes in cold weather in order to keep your body warm. I should have a wide range of clothes suitable for diverse weather conditions in areas with changing climates. On the other hand, when the temperature is constant, I can wear the same outfits all year long, and there is no need to spend my money buying new pieces of clothing.
Secondly, living in an area with the same weather decreases the chance of getting sick. When you spend a lot of time in a specific climate, your body gains the ability to tolerate that condition and acclimate to it. For example, it is hard to live in an extremely cold area, but if you spend a considerable time in places with cold weather, your body become resilient to cold temperature, and it won’t bother you anymore as much as it did before. Consequently, it is unlikely for you to catch a cold or flu. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I got admitted to the university, I had to move to a cold city. I was accustomed to the mild weather of my hometown. Thus, it was tough for me to adapt to that condition and this temperature change made me sick a couple of times in the first month of living there. However, after a year, my body acclimated to that cool environment. I barely caught a cold, which was surprising because I was susceptible to the cold climate before moving.
In conclusion, my preference is to live in an area with constant weather. This is because I do not need to spend my money on different kinds of clothes, and the chances of getting sick will decrease since my body gets used to that condition.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51879699248 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67343253841 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491228070175 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9426245538 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.15 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.95 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271980342475 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085136870113 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741376676032 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168263799454 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265645273467 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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