"Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice."
The climate has much influence on people's lives because they take advantage of having the same climate all year long. However, others like to experience the difference of living in a place where the climate is variable.
First, some people like places where the climate does not change at all because they do not like to change their routine. As a result, when the climate changes, people may not feel comfortable with that as they might feel that they have to change their routine. For example: if they practice outdoor sports such as baseball, softball, and surfing. For them, it is better to be living in a place where the climate is stable all year long. Additionally, when people live in places where there is hot weather all year, they can arrange barbecues, beach parties, and practice surfing. In contrast to people who like to experience the weather changes throughout the year, those who experience the four seasons of the year can appreciate each season with their specialty.
Living in a place where the weather changes is great because the four seasons of the year can be living more closely. That is why I prefer living in a place where I can experience different activities, which can be done each season. First, In the spring I can picnic in the park, see the cherry blossoms, or take a hike. Second, In summer I could go camping, spend time on the lake or do barbecues with friends. Third, for autumn I could visit the pumpkin patch or pick up pumpkins, or walk through the forest. Fourth, in winter I could play in the snow, ice skating, etc. Furthermore, experiencing the change of each season makes me feel more connected to nature.
Experience of the fourth season gives people a different perspective of the year, for those who have not experienced the fourth season once, they cannot imagine what it is like living in a country or place where the air is even different every fourth month. Finally, sometimes the weather conditions change people's moods since the weather affects them, whether it can boost their living or can cause depression.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, third, for example, in contrast, such as, as a result, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79608938547 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46019622449 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466480446927 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.848688323 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379356001471 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131826137082 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103349762701 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259657608225 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708215550829 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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