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Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Essay topics: Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

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When it comes to the issue that what weather is suitable for living? Some people prefer to live in a place with change climate. However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight, because it delighted and you have access many activities.

First and the most important reason is that different weather lets us to enjoy more of our life. I think that a small example can give some light on this matter. A city with four seasons allows you to walk through a forest, which is an awesome paint in fall. Winter, when every where is covered by snow, you can fell pleasant silence. In spring and summer, you can enjoy hearing birds’ song or seeing their dance. In this way, the biggest advantage of a city with various weather lies in the fact that helps us to have delighted experience.

A further point we must consider is that every weather is suitable for certain activities. Hence, if we lives in various climate, we can have access many activities. I think that there is not a better example than y self when I was living in a small town, which always is cold. At that time, I had to wake up early morning when was still night, for going to the school. Moreover, the routine day was so small that we could not go to soccer practice or other activities after school time, which was boring. After, I moved other city, which had all seasons, to study in the university; I meet another face of the life. There are I did not face any limitation for do physical activities, because I could swimming in a river in spring and summer, riding the bike in roads of jungle in autumn, or even skiing in the winter.

Admittedly, for living is diversity of weather impose on you many expenses. In fact, it is quite normal that you can not wear T- shirt and Jeans in the winter or Jacket in hot days of summer. Therefore, you have to pay much money to purchase clothes which are proper for a special season. Nonetheless, I think that it is worth paying for enjoying more of life.

All above evidence supports this undeniable that a city with variety weather allows you to more enjoy of live and do plenty of outdoor activities. Of course, as an English proverb goes “a coin has two sides”; therefore, those who take the opposite are partly reasonable that you need to purchase more clothes in a place, which has a variety climate. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that its benefits outweigh dangerous.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
... an awesome paint in fall. Winter, when every where is covered by snow, you can fell pleasa...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
...le for certain activities. Hence, if we lives in various climate, we can have access ...
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Line 5, column 702, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'swim'
Suggestion: swim
...do physical activities, because I could swimming in a river in spring and summer, riding...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 432, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e that its benefits outweigh dangerous.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'i think', 'in fact', 'of course']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223320158103 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.152173913043 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0849802371542 0.0866891130778 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0434782608696 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0671936758893 0.0685040099705 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124505928854 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0237154150198 0.0351676179071 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.44112614695 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0256916996047 0.0309702414327 83% => OK
Particles: 0.00197628458498 0.00188951952338 105% => OK
Determiners: 0.0849802371542 0.0887237588012 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0158102766798 0.0209618222197 75% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0276679841897 0.0139019557991 199% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2463.0 2387.08602151 103% => OK
No of words: 442.0 408.028673835 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57239819005 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.303167420814 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.223981900452 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.115384615385 0.174417080927 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0633484162896 0.112833075102 56% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44112614695 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527149321267 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 60.9454398108 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4166666667 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5095796284 48.84282405 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.625 120.699889404 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.541666666667 0.644075263715 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 40.8148567119 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.41353383459 1.45489161554 97% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372920904211 0.300154397459 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0767515915863 0.103427244359 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0627797670941 0.0752933317313 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.439639818949 0.497263757937 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.108965865471 0.151897553556 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123714131729 0.114077575197 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744332231869 0.0781384742642 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.305931139881 0.336927656856 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0466193697996 0.067059652881 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248047034046 0.210909579961 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439989256631 0.0618886996521 71% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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