Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Most people think it is a good idea to live in place that have the same weather because they prefer to keep their lives on the same routine without any change in their habit. However, I prefer to live in places where the weather is changing during the year.
To begin with, living in a place that weather changes over the year is an amazing experience. People would be able to see the change in the environment and explore the differences. I remember when I lived in Denver last year, I encountered changing in the weather several times in the year. In the first of the year, the weather was very cold, and all the city was covered with snow. It was wonderful experience to see all mountains having the white color. Then, by the middle of the year, the weather started to be warm, and all trees begin to be more colorful and brighter. After that, the weather becomes very hot, so I saw the dust storm coming to the city. Obviously, it was a great experience to me seeing the weather changes over the year.
Opponents of people who live in places where weather changes over the year say that people will waste a lot of money when they live in different seasonal weather. They have to buy clothes or equipment’s whenever the weather changes such as in cold weather, they have to buy big blankets and some wood to warm them. Yet, I think people would buy all these things one time only. Then, they have to store them for the next season. I remember my brother Ahmed who live in New York, he used to store all his family coats in the basement, so when winter comes, he takes them out and wear them. indeed, people will not lose any money when they live in places with weather changes.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that living in an area with changeable weather is more amazing. This is because I would enjoy the experience of seeing and exploring all different seasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47093023256 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29829192107 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485465116279 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2780839882 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4444444444 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42137385783 0.236089414692 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148738832339 0.076458572812 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1091974926 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26564092379 0.150856017488 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100508336698 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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