some people prefer to live in a small town. others prefer to live in big city. which one do u prefer?
Some people like to spend their life in the small town, while others rather to live in large city. Personally, I prefer to live in mega city with too many population. This essay will discuss my reasons in following paragraphs.
First, these days find a proper job is fundamental requirement for people, who is going to college or try to learn a profession. So, the most significant merit of living in big city is access to more job opportunity. Since there is a wide range of different job, people can find their interesting job and earn money. Furthermore, people earn more money than small city which bring about luxury and welfare life. Thus, they can spend more money for their leisure time and satisfy their desire.
Second, more facility such as better university, equipped hospital, large park and public transportation system are available in big city than small one. According to new research which published by migration effect institution (MEI), the most important reason of moving from small town to big city is their requirement to access some facilities which are available in big city. For instance, I moved to Tehran (capital of Iran, where has a 13 million population), because there were some famous university and I could study in my favorite major.
Last but not lees, need to have communication with different people is another reason why I choose big city for life. As I am extrovert and sociable, I like to meet different people with different culture. Living in big city provide this chance for me. In contrast to small city, in big city there are different peoples with different costumes and cultures (peoples who migrate from another countries) and learn many things about them.
In conclusion, whether some people willing to live in small city, others like to live in big city. Based on my personal character I prefer to live in big city. Three major reasons were discussed to support this idea.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun population seems to be countable; consider using: 'many populations'.
Suggestion: many populations
... I prefer to live in mega city with too many population. This essay will discuss my reasons in ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'in contrast to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247978436658 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.132075471698 0.158761421928 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.140161725067 0.0866891130778 162% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0242587601078 0.046263068375 52% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0485175202156 0.0685040099705 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118598382749 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0215633423181 0.0351676179071 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58826184966 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0458221024259 0.0309702414327 148% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0458221024259 0.0887237588012 52% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010781671159 0.0209618222197 51% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0188679245283 0.0139019557991 136% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1926.0 2387.08602151 81% => OK
No of words: 327.0 408.028673835 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88990825688 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.31498470948 0.338922669872 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214067278287 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152905198777 0.174417080927 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119266055046 0.112833075102 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58826184966 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54128440367 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 57.4619930304 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.1666666667 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.965182796 48.84282405 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 120.699889404 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.722222222222 0.644075263715 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 39.5733944954 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.89473684211 1.45489161554 130% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.507697493629 0.300154397459 169% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114916964702 0.103427244359 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.082107501277 0.0752933317313 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.544565399716 0.497263757937 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136736179664 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185997321726 0.114077575197 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157489560781 0.0781384742642 202% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.257806566475 0.336927656856 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0492518549829 0.067059652881 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.350039779047 0.210909579961 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179605766156 0.0618886996521 290% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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