television has destroyed communication among friends and family. agree or disagree?
Television has some programs which are enjoyable and amusing peoples. In my point of view these program and generally, television disturb people communication with each other. This assay will mention some of these disadvantages in following paragraphs.
First, one of the most significant demerit of television is creating trouble for families. In majority case there is just one television device in each house, but there are wide range of tastes in there. So, device limitation it causes argue among family members which leads to separation and destroy members respect to each other. Meanwhile, parents want to watch serial, but girls like to watch cartoon and the boys like to watch football match. It is obvious that they will face trouble in making decision and finally two groups will be sad.
Second, family members spend a lot of their time for watching television program. Before this, peoples spend more times with together and play a group activity such as soccer, basketball, volleyball and etc. in contrast these days they stay at home and watch television and have a less communication with others. For instance, when I was a child, I had five close friends who were as same as my age. We played together and had a lot of fun and good memories with each other, which helped me to improve my social skill and be more successful now. On the other hand my cousin did not have ant friend and just watched television alone. Therefore, he is Introvert and cannot has a relationship with others.
Finally, spending much time with television causes different mental and emotional problems. According to the new article published by media control organization (MCO) stress and fear caused as a result of watching television more than ten hours per a day. It shows the influence of television on person’s manner and their communication with family and friends.
In conclusion, television has some bad effect on people relationships and communications. Three major reasons, which includes mental problem, Introvert, and argue among peoples was discussed to support this idea.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... such as soccer, basketball, volleyball and etc. in contrast these days they stay at hom...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.281984334204 0.229887763892 123% => OK
Verbs: 0.138381201044 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0861618798956 0.0866891130778 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0417754569191 0.046263068375 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0417754569191 0.0685040099705 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11227154047 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0287206266319 0.0351676179071 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74432596096 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0208877284595 0.0309702414327 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0678851174935 0.0887237588012 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0104438642298 0.0209618222197 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0156657963446 0.0139019557991 113% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2086.0 2387.08602151 87% => OK
No of words: 341.0 408.028673835 84% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11730205279 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.375366568915 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272727272727 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.187683284457 0.174417080927 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129032258065 0.112833075102 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74432596096 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598240469208 0.524397521467 114% => OK
Word variations: 69.0744801002 59.2087087015 117% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.05 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.253814133 48.84282405 50% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.3 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.05 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.644075263715 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 44.3227272727 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.90588235294 1.45489161554 131% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25437385778 0.300154397459 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0649210053106 0.103427244359 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0461108631864 0.0752933317313 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.475736767168 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119514635787 0.151897553556 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922143565592 0.114077575197 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624880498777 0.0781384742642 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.243385135169 0.336927656856 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0782598051088 0.067059652881 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164567948633 0.210909579961 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448552169375 0.0618886996521 72% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.86379928315 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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